Moonshaker Cavalry is solid if you can get the mana, but usually you want to be dropping Akromas Will when you have six or seven mana, not eight, with some leftover to play another creature or a removal spell
Plus dinosaur is a popular creature type these days
Artifact , : Put a charge counter on Jeweled Amulet
David Rood "Experience is the best teacher" is a maxim that holds true in many things, and Magic: The Gathering is among them
Theres also no reason why it should look so evil and contorted
Dont overload the rules text If your custom card needs 11 lines of text, consider one of these options: tighten wording use existing keyword phrasing where it makes sense split it into two cards accept that you are making a commander that is also a short story Keep readability as the goal Custom cards live on a table, not in a zoomed-in screenshot